The rest of the day passed slowly and Grace was exhausted. Staying hidden in the closet until nighttime, Grace crawled out quietly and lay on her cot to sleep.
Drawing Chompy close to her, she whispered, “Will I ever make a single friend here?”
Soft light from the moon shined through the painted shut window and onto the metal cot beside hers and cast a warm glow that reflected onto the wall. Squinting her eyes, Grace pretended to see actual stars. A tiny galaxy shining just for her. Sighing, she closed her eyes and listened to the electrical hum of the radiator as it lulled her to sleep.
Great chapter. Left me wanting more. Can’t wait for the next one.
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I’m excited too!
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Chompy! He’s so out of place, but so in place. He was meant to be in TS4!
I love your writing style and I keep hoping against hope for Grace!
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Chompy is such a comfort. Let’s hope Grace can hang in there.
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Loving these short but powerful chapters!
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Thank you! π I’m sure they will get longer eventually. But for now, short and sweet.
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Makes me so happy that Chompy is her friend!
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Chompy is truly wonderful. I love how Grace shares her greatest comfort with newcomer, Sophie. π
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It’s so touching. And look at Sophie’s response.
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I know. Sophie really needs a friend right now. Grace as well. Sophie’s background is up under, “Meet the Characters.” She is fortunate she’s alive.
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Nice & short. Hope it’s nice to see she has a sense of hope.
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I mean’t. It’s nice to see she has a sense of hope.
lol, me and my two way mind. I’m liking your story so far.
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Thank you, Sunny Shay! I’m excited you’re here! π
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I agree, beautiful way to show the hope in her heart, squinting her eyes and imagining stars.
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Grace is childlike even when she has to be an adult and take care of herself. I love that about her.
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I’m just now backtracking from reading recent posts and I wanted to let you know I can’t see the pics on this post! D: Maybe it’s just me? I’m loving this story so far, by the way!!
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Hmm… Chapter 2. I will look into it! Thank you! π
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And chapter 3!
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OK, I fixed Chapter 2. Let me know if it looks better. I will fix Chapter 3 now. Thank you!!!!!!
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you fixed it! π
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Chapter 3 fixed. Let me know if it’s ok now. A few weeks ago there was a problem with Photobucket. I hoped I had caught all of the missing images. My computer shows all of the images, it’s the amazing people like you that let me know if something is missing. A HUUUGE thank you! Let me know if you find others. Thank you soooooo much for your help! π
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Well, I’m going through right now and I’ll let you know if I find any more! β€
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Thank you! π
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I finally got round to updating myself on your writing and it’s so good! I’m attached to Grace already β€
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Thank you for reading Grace’s story! I’m pretty attached to little Grace as well. π
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